LucidShadowDreamer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Redemption]

This is wonderful! I love the ambient genre in general, and this is some damn good ambient music o.O

To begin with, the panning is great. I also like the fact that you're not afraid to use very bright sounds (+ points for not making them headache inducing!!).
The talking and other IRL sounds are a nice touch, and gives this track a real movie vibe. It also shows how well you managed to mix this.
The sound that plays through the entire track that sounds like a clock that ticks too fast is brilliant. It gives the sense that time is ticking away very quickly somehow, even if this is a slower track in general, with a sad touch.
I really get the "someone lying in a hospital" sense from this music, for whatever reason (even if you didn't use that heart monitor sound). I guess that the vibe is just similar; you're kinda waiting for something to happen, seemingly powerless to affect the outcome.
I know that the story is different than that though, from both the title, the talking and the "mistakes" and the description though. I'm just saying everything that comes to mind. I guess that in general, this also evokes the "too late", "the worst imaginable thing has already happened" vibe, if you know what I mean, which is more in line with the story XD

The vibrato strings are also cool; as I already said, nice panning work in this track. The static is of course cool too, as are the footsteps here and there.

I love the robotic sound in the ending, especially as it seems to be saying "mistakes", a few times (maybe something else before that?). I knew that the ticking would stop during the last seconds. It's pretty perfect. I think I would've made it tick as loud as possible at the very end right before stopping, and really letting the reberb that is left be heard for a while. You did make it louder, which is nice, but I think the effect could be even more dramatic (without overdoing it, of course).

Without the talking and other recorded sounds, this could also fit perfectly as background music for certain kinds of games. Of course, this track is telling a story almost as a timeline. But it would not be difficult to make this loop (not saying you should though, just a speculation), and even more, it could give the sense that the player is stuck in a loop that they can't affect.

I always love atmospheric music, and this sure is some great atmospheric music. I think you could definitely become a movie soundtrack composer, with your ability of storytelling, and attention to detail.

Absolutely wonderful work with this in general. I don't really have any criticism, as I think this track really conveys what it's supposed to quite well, while everything sounds good. Keep up the awesome work!

P.S. Is that a rocking chair close to the end, like at 4:42?

neBSounds responds:

hey man cheers for the detailed review. glad you like the tune and you're not far off the story I was going for! The idea was about a man facing death, dwelling on how he's lived his life in his short time on earth and what comes next as he drifts closer to the light. He's then slowly reassured that there is nothing to dwell on as nothing really matters when the light fades to darkness.

"P.S. Is that a rocking chair close to the end, like at 4:42?"
No all the creaky sounds/footsteps you hear throughout is actually a field recording of me and my girlfriend walking through the louvre in paris and I agree with your point about the ticking at the end. I tried to make it louder and increased the wet of the reverb but I did get a bit lazy. I do think maybe applying another reverb for that last hit would be much more effective and will go back to that at some point.

thanks for all the feedback dude and I'm glad the music shows the thoughts I'm trying to portray..

[Tetris Theme (Dubstep)]

This sounds awesome! :D
I'm pretty sure the Tetris Theme has been made in every genre. I am happy to have heard a dubstep cover now (somehow I have managed not to hear one before this).
Great work, both of ya ;)

[~{ || MEGA || }~]

Even though it's closing in on 11 am, and I still haven't slept, I cannot help but leave a review for this. I am in awe o.O
This sounds extremely brilliantly exclusively super rad, dude! :O
The production alone is wonderful, but so are the melodies. Great taste in intrumentation, progression etc. No criticisms here.
Insta favorite!!!

Keep it up, you should definitely be proud ;)

larrynachos responds:

Oh geez, get some sleep dude xD

I'm so glad you enjoyed the song so much dude! I do think there are parts I could improve on, but I'm VERY proud of this piece.

Thanks!

[Uplift]

Oh yes, I almost forgot to review this. But I came back to it in order to hear it again (it's so good :3), and i noticed I didn't leave a review. I've been pretty busy lately...
And it's 10:39 am now, and I still haven't gone to sleep, hahha XD

So excuse me for not leaving an extensive review. But this track is really good, as I've told you before :D

Awesome work, and keep it up ;)

Troisnyx responds:

Cheers, meep ^_^ You really need some sleep after all that....

[What Lies Beyond]

Tssk tssk. Once again with the zero voting (I saw the score drop from really high to insanely low in just a few seconds, so...). Oh well, hopefully the score will rise again, but regardless of the score, this is an awesome track :)

And you know, it's just my style. You have such a nice way of composing! Actually, our approach is kinda similar at some points when it comes to music of this genre. Once again, your track has reminded me of the good old days of retro JRPG:s.

And man. The harmonies! Melodies under melodies. I love it (and I tend to do it as well). But you've done it very successfully way here. All the simultaneous melodies are easy to follow, imo, as well as fit nice into the mix with the other intruments playing. The melodies are all very nice and soothing, as is the general sound design. Also, I love how you hid some darker and more mysterious chords in the mix at points!

The glockenspiel and bells too, they sound so great! I have a love/dislike relationship with the harp in this track though. Don't get me wrong, all the harp parts are good. I just think there's too much of it here, to be able to really enjoy it's presence! It basically plays all the time, except for a few parts, like the nice breakdown at 1:45.

I for one, totally understand your choice not to use percussion in this track. For one, most kinds of percussion would not fit in this track at all. I would've personally enjoyed a light but deep gong at a couple spots though, just to add to the atmosphere. That's just my personal opinion though :D
Some of the bells actually sound a bit like atmospheric percussion, and they really add to the mood (referring to the ones that start at 2:38)!

The mixing is far superior to mine, so no real comment on that. What were you using to make this track? Some of the intruments almost sound like good sound fonts (I mean that in a good way, as I actually quite enjoy the sound of many of them)! But you probably used something else, so I'm curious to hear how you managed to mix them to sound like this o.O

And yes. Those trills. Funny thing is, I actually hid a flute trill myself at one point, in the track that dem0 and I are working on :D
Can't say for sure yet, but there's a good chance our track will be pretty huge, and very different from this. Despite using percussion, I have tried to make it enjoyable on many levels.
This track is definitely worthy of being an opponent :)

I just hope the judges won't automatically like a faster track better. But from what I've seen so far, they seem to be relatively fair when it comes to genre.

I forgot to mention. I also like how there is very little repetition in this track. Many people seem to find that something always needs to repeat, and have some kind of a main melody. While I think that they're not wrong, I find it doesn't apply to every situation. This is a track I just want to listen to while relaxing, and enjoying the beauty.

Well, I guess I may have rambled on for enough time now. I too found the brass in the end to be a bit jarring, or at least harsh, upon first listen. But having listened to this several times now, I've kinda grown accustomed to it.
Alright.

Once again, beautiful track, dude! A very relaxing change from many of the heavier tracks in the NGADM. Favorited for sure :D
Good luck!!!

ChronoNomad responds:

Yeah, we can't quite get rid of the zero voters, but at least they only get one. Don't they understand that this is a competition? No sense of propriety, whatsoever. I'm so glad that you like the track, Lucid! We might be rivals in this competition, but I am proud to consider you a friend. I'm just here to make great music and have a bit of fun in the process. It's a great opportunity to push ourselves artistically, after all.

Man, you know I love your reviews. They are always so chock full of good stuff! And I definitely agree that we have a number of interesting things in common when it comes to music like this. It's awesome to get some comments on the melodic and harmonious layers. Those darker bits and mysterious chords are a great way to tap into other emotions, and they're all connected to the overall theme. I wanted to do lots of different things with each instrument, and when you work with lots of different kinds of instruments that really opens things up for a world of variety. Vibrato, trill, expressive attacks, plucks and strums. The universe of music is just so brilliantly expansive! And that's just speaking of the Classical genre...

Another fan of the glockenspiel and tubular bells! But I'm a little sad to hear that you get tired of the harp. I do understand of course, but that was one of the instruments that I really worked on keeping fresh by using it in different ways, changing up the direction of the arpeggios, and so on. It is true that it plays throughout most of the track, but I wanted it to be the secondary driving force to the cello, taking over when some of those slower, super expressive attacks are only beginning their ascension toward crescendo.

I really agree with all your comments here about percussion; it just never felt like it fit in with this track to me. I'm not actually sure I actually have a gong anymore after having to rebuild my VST collection, though I'm sure I could find one easily enough. The tubular bells really do a nice job of filling things out, just like you say.

Ah, there's an interesting little tale regarding the VST that I used for this! I promise to keep it brief. As I'm sure you recall, I was in the first Deserted Island Contest and shared the 2nd place spot with Emid. Long story short, every single instrument that I utilized for this composition is straight from the Versilian Studios Chamber Orchestra! It's a real memory hog and some of the articulation changes don't work quite as intended, but I loved it from the first moment I heard it and figured I could make a pretty nice ADM track with it! :D Pretty doggone solid for an alpha version, if you ask me.

As for the mixing, it's mostly the usual: Parametric EQ, Stereo Enhancement, Convolver for realistic spatial reverb, a touch of Soundgoodizer just to enhance each instrument's presence, and a bit of Compression mostly to make the really soft cello parts more pronounced. I also had to use a couple instances of Edison for WAV files when all was said and done since it wasn't possible to put all the instruments together in a single file. Whew!

Flute trills are the best! I shall have to seek out your hidden flute trill, good sir. I'm really looking forward to hearing what you guys come up with in this round, and I just want to go on record by saying that I'm not down on percussion or anything. I just didn't use any. I love drums that are well done, but I'm admittedly kind of bored by the overuse of very similar kinds of drums across so many Cinematic tracks. The term "Cinematic" doesn't even have much meaning to me as a genre since it seems to be applied to so much these days, but I suppose even my track could fall under that umbrella. That said, it's 100% Classical and that's what I decided to go with. :)

Yep, I think the judges are pretty fair about stuff like tempo and genre differences. Of course each judge has their own favorites and sense of musicality, or what works for them, so you just never know what to expect...especially when there are six judges all told! Should be an interesting battle and I've totally brought my A-game. Incidentally, this song's tempo is 146 bpm. Bet that's a bit of a surprise, eh? (;

And now you come to my favorite nuance of this particular track: the lack of repetition! I generally have a limit to how many times I think a particular progression should repeat, so I keep that ideal in my head whether I'm composing or reviewing. That said, making a song like this with very little actually repeating means I don't have to worry about that at all! Which is pretty nice, if you ask me. Repetition has its place, but - in my humble opinion - too much can mar the integrity of a song. Variety, after all, is the spice of life!

Mhmm, I figured folks would find that extra brassy bit at the end jarring, but you took it to the next level and gave it a few more listens so it could grow on you. Right nice of you, LSD. Much appreciated all around and thank you ever so much for such an overwhelmingly informative review! You rock heavily.

Best of luck to you and dem0, too! Love the stuff you guys put out, so just being up against you two is an honour. I've actually been wondering what you think of the portmanteau I whipped up using your names: LSdem0 (or LSDem0). Excelsior!

[Zen]

This is such a tasty jam! :O
Great job, and good luck in the contest :D

PirateCrab responds:

Raspberry Jam! Thanks pal you too!

[Last song I worked on]

Once again, it's a real shame that your laptop broke. This track really has potential!
Good luck with solving your hardware troubles in the future ;)

Everratic responds:

I used Fl Studio for an hour today without my computer turning off. This might be good news. Even if it still turns off while I'm working, if I can use it at least one hour a day, that's sufficient.

[Mission 01]

Once again, I don't really have much at all to say. This short review is your punishment for writing a track that's just too good to really criticise without going super in depth, and even then it would be very difficult.
So...

TL;DR:

Amazing job, dude! :D

Noisysundae responds:

Punishment for writing it too short, you mean. :P

[Hope (Piano)]

I'm pretty sure you could pick any chord progression in the world, with any melody, and still make it beautiful, using nothing else that the dynamic and expression in you playing style. I actually improvised for one and a half hour on a real piano today, and I noticed I was playing very silimarly to this. I understand precisely why you would choose such a way to let your emotions flow. Rather than having a simple and clearly defined melody that you repeat with intelligent chord progressions, you can actually show just as much emotion by just playing in a certain way (not saying there's no melody or good chord progression here though). At least for improvisations. That said, I usually like the combination of the two the most. Which is perfect for the original version of the track (well, I guess that in one sence, this probably is just as much the original version).

The arpeggios are nice, so it's good to hear them. I like how you kept some silent backing strings in there as well, as they don't really take anything away.

I think that's it for this review really. I like the track, but I'd rather just listen to it today, than engage in an in-depth analysis. Thank you for sharing :)

Phonometrologist responds:

You are always generous with your words, but I don't mean that to sound that I think you're being unauthentic in the words that you use for I really do take them to heart. It really was just using dynamics to express the beauty of music really. Perhaps a little bit of hesitation (rubato) between notes here and there too. I don't know.. this is a weird piece in terms of listening but not being able to necessary know what to hold on to. I understand the chord progressions of what I'm doing obviously but my brain really doesn't follow it chord by chord, but rather the overall structure and sound of it. Just showing that I get what you mean.

[Witches' Hut]

For being just a thing, this is pretty awesome :)
Simplicity is sometimes very effective. It's a shame that the piece cuts off at the end though. You will keep doing this to us, won't you? I guess it's time to just start accepting it... OR WILL I?

It's a shame you didn't make it to Ludum Dare or NGADM, but this piece makes up for it ;)

johnfn responds:

I have no shame. I'll keep doing it to my death. I plan to die in the middle of a sentence.