Well, well, you certainly managed to make a melodic trance. Is there no genre you won't be able to succeed in making music in? I'm beginning to doubt there is :3
I can definitely hear the johnfn in this. And indeed, who else to turn to when in search for melodies of this kind? I think johnfn'd like this too, so he better come and give it a listen :)
Already at the beginning, I realized that this was going to be a good, relaxing song. I like the sub bass/synth that comes in at 0:15, and the claps that come short thereafter. They keep going for most of the song too, even if they are not always in focus :p
And really good job with the synths especially. They are very calming in the background, and the leads are all good too. The melodies are all nice. I think I'll try out something in this genre too, sometime.
Not only that, but the piano is really well mixed, and appears at all the right places.
See, you should make a bad song soon, so that I have something to criticise :(
All the transitions, as well as all the small details in the background are what makes this song go above the 4.5 star rating. It's not only relaxing, but there's much musical value nonetheless. That wind in that interlude for instance, was great (1:50). Actually it's blowing pretty much throughout the whole song, but that was the first time I noticed it :p
Seriously though. If I didn't know this was from you, I'd label this song as having been made by johnfn, and I wouldn't question it for a second. Isn't that stealing? Lol, ofc not :D He may have grown to think so, but he doesn't own this genre >:)
This song could've been more complicated at times, but I think that would ruin some of the calm mood.
Finally, I really like how you brought back a shadow of the melody one final time at the very end (3:20).
I think this is great. If you keep going like this, you'll develop so fast in every genre that you can please every ear :'D
It'll be fun to see what genre you'll do next (next). After guitar month I suggested bagtime month to johnfn. Maybe you'll do the most epic bagpipe song ever in his stead! ...
I wonder what genre that'd be on Newgrounds...
I did hear the preview for the next song. I even wrote a review about it :'3