First of, let me tell you that your melodies seem to be improving with every track, which is great! The harmonies are splendid at several points.
Secondly, let me tell you that House music isn't usually among my favorite genres. This might be because I've heard the genre too much at parties, along with the fact that I often find the tracks repetitive to a fault.
Thirdly, let me tell you that despite this, I really enjoyed this piece.
Fourthly, let me tell you that despite that, I think the rhythm of the bass and the percussion could probably be varied a bit more.
Fifthly, let me tell you that the percussion is still far better thatn it would be having been made by me.
Sixthly, let me tell you that I enjoyed the automation is spots like the intro, which makes for pretty good transitions throughout the entire piece.
Seventhly, let me tell you that I think the intrument choices were pretty good, but I personally prefer slightly warmer and more varied sounds, as the same intruments seem to have been used a lot.
Eightly, let me tell you that this is pretty good for having spent no more than 7 hours!
Ninethly, let me tell you that the mix feels pretty balanced, though there could be more dynamic variation and perhaps a cleared breakdown with only one or two intruments at some point, and that 2:20 could perhaps have been transitioned to in a better way, as the sudden filter felt a bit weird.
Tenthly, let me tell you that I liked the ending, and that this piece is now among my favorites.