Well, this is still great :)
I think you did a perfect job with the transition at about 0:25! That's exactly what I meant, and it sounds good now :D
I don't really have anything to complain about. The transition into the piano break might've been a bit unexpected, but it still works well (the transition out of it is awesome ;D)
The ending is okay too :p
Rated 5, favorited and loved in general :3
I like reading descriptions btw XD
A free internet cookie is not to be mine today though, although I do like the name :'D