Sorry for the late review! Seems we both stayed up the night to work on our projects, given our time zones :'D
I love the atmosphere you build in the beginning. It's very pleasant-sounding, and it builds up perfectly to the very intense second part of the piece. Speaking of which, I do love when it hits! Very cool rhythm, and I always like to hear sounds that are a bit avant-grade; it really makes your style stand out! The power of the percussion is quite something too!
I love the alien voice. I'll look forward to hearing the expanded version at some point. Good luck!